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kenneth cale

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I wanna write a story...
« on: August 29, 2011, 06:34:32 pm »
C'mon guys, youre roleplayers. You guys must all have ideas for a story you want to write but dont have the time or talent or attention span. I know I do. Write your basic idea here. Be as detailed as you like. Inspire our writers who do have time and talent. It doesnt have to be medieval or even furry. Although lets keep it PG as always :3

I want to write a story about two lovers in a time where people commonly live and work their daily lives in a virtual reality. You can only see and hear and move and interact with other objects. you cant feel or smell or anything advanced. The tech is still flawed. They live out their lives perhaps from opposite ends of the earth. or maybe even different planets. perhaps during a war time where physical meeting is impossible. but they eventually get tired of the pseudo-reality and try to meet in real life.

ill include a sample i guess. maybe yall will too?

=Matthew was tired of the rowdy Game Hall full of younger Avatars. Whiney 13 year olds, and screaming 7 year olds were beneath his 19 years of experience. He knew he wasn't much older in the grand scheme of things, but he felt being able to realize that counted for something. He strolled out through the ornate neon door flashing with Game characters and titles. His hoverbike was floating there where he left it every day.Only he could operate it, so there was no need to secure it. That was one advantage of owning property on The Server. He hopped on and  was speeding down the crowded road on his motorcycle and laughed as he sped around slower traffic harassing people on the walkways. He liked running into people. New Avatars still tended to flinch before he phased through them. Fortunately or unfortunately depending on who you asked, Avatars can't interact with each other physically as this would overload The Server with collision data. However, you can definitely interact with inanimate objects. He experienced this when he destroyed his expensive jet by crashing into the side of a gadget shop a year or so ago. he couldnt quite recall. He was still enjoying not going to school anymore so time sorta ran together for him. I wonder if i should get a job, he thought, powersliding through a crowd to make a sharp turn, i know i wouldnt have to settle for some little kids game hall if i had some money of my own. But then i wouldnt have as much free time to visit Jackie. He smiled softly as the thought of long black hair and a silly grin passed though his head. they had been dating for two years now and were definitely in love. they had thought to get married but Online weddings have been outlawed for 23 years so they settled for what his mother referred to as "living together", although he didnt quite understand the term since they didnt live together, even Online. He was jolted from his daydreaming at screams of "look out, dumbass!" and "what the hell are you doing?!" he realized he was about to run off the edge of a road that had suddenly decided to turn to the left. He thought he had the road memorized by now since he visits Jackie every day. 'But there can be no accounting for the ADD stricken mind' he often told himself. he leaned hard to the side and brought his back wheel forward so that he was turned perpendicular to his trajectory. It wasnt enough. He was definitely about to plow over the edge when suddenly everything went black. he once again felt his helmet and he sighed as he took it off and stepped out of his ServerPod and looked out the broken window. The power was out to the whole city and the riots had started again. The latter likely causing the former. he went to his bed and lied down and napped.=

i dunno if im all that good. maybe your ideas will be better? :D what is a story but roleplaying with your mind? :3
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Re: I wanna write a story...
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2011, 08:23:19 pm »
I have many story ideas, but I'm actually trying to write a book series to do with them.

The Seven Realms of Chaos are my particular favorites. Each and every one has a very solid immersive plot line, and I'm using them as D&D campaigns to get a better idea of how to make the hero of the story more real. Every person who plays the campaign makes different choices that I can use to see how the hero would be.

The first is Istria. The book would be named Sorcerous Mare. Set in a post apocalyptic world where humans have mutated into anthropomorphic animal shape-shifters, a war between a corrupt and nearly all powerful sorceress and the Gods that preceded her is joined and aided by the next Sorceress, a horse shifter named Sira. I have nearly 4 chapters written, but it's been so difficult that I've set it down.

Here is an excerpt:

Johzan had never seen Sira's magic before. Forty years in the service of the Dragoon warlord had dulled his mind to the possibility that such a thing existed outside his own race. Now, standing before the mare as the earth rose to defend her, he could see that all his life he had been wrong... Magic did indeed exist, and in great measure.

"Joh, look out!" he didn't move quickly enough. The frightened howl of Torane the werewolf fell on distracted ears, and he turned around only to see a maw full of teeth.

"No! Johzan!" he barely registered the frantic voice of Sira as he finally realized he was halfway in the mouth of the black dragon, being swung form side to side and only saved death by his armor. Cursing his situation, the Dragoon found he had no choice left. He must change. He must break his vow to stay human and become his true self. With a sigh, he went limp and focused on the spark within him, feeling the jaws shut around him stretch outward as his skin became blue scales and bulged outward with muscle, his body becoming larger and twisting into something new.

He tumbled to the ground as the black dragon's jaw broke and slammed his newly horned head into the other's side, wings flaring as a fire built in his throat. Johzan had become a Dragon.
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Re: I wanna write a story...
« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2011, 05:21:45 pm »
you already wrote one? :D i had to make up mine on the spot, thus having no formatting.
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Re: I wanna write a story...
« Reply #3 on: August 30, 2011, 08:46:01 pm »
Well, it's not a finished story and it's about 5-6 years old so it's not written at my best. The part I used here was a lot worse off in the actual story, but I rewrote it because I'm going to rewrite the whole thing.
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